great so far !!! one thing i noticed though: sometimes the pronouns mess up. so far i have selected myself, simon, and theodore to be guys, but i still see a few times where one of them or myself is referred to as her. thx
The night your grandmother passes, the deity tells of a prophecy that spreads like wildfire throughout the kingdoms.
And suddenly you are praised.
They want you to give them something extraordinary, but they aren't prepared for a gift that will shake the empire to its very core.
So then you are scorned.
- Play as male, female, or non-binary.
- Customize your character; personality, appearance, sexuality.
- Choose from four romance options, [Male or Female.]
- Decide your feelings on the Deity’s gift.
- Survive assassination attempts through wit, strength, or pure luck.
- Grow up in the castle, perhaps stay there.
- Discover your magic spark, or perhaps your fighting talent instead.
- Make friends, enemies, and fall in love.
Theodore/Theodora is the knight assigned to you since you were young.
Physical Description: Chestnut skin paired with dark brown, short, coiled hair. Wide set, soft, amber eyes with a nubian nose, and heart shaped lips.
“I don’t care what happens to them—it’s you I’m here for.”
Azrail is the assassin hired to take your life.
Physical Description: Fawn skin, with black hair, messily cut to their shoulders. Sharp, upturned, ink blue eyes. A Greek like nose, and medium shaped lips.
“It’s all or nothing—so make your decision now.”
Simon/Simone is the servant who’s been with you as long as you can remember.
Physical Description: Pale skin against straight, black hair, braided if female, to ears if male. Rounded, parallel, dark eyes. A flat nose and small lips.
“I’m here for you, even if that means nothing.”
Rainer/Rainey: A noble who came with their father to seek your hand in marriage, though they didn't want it even before the Deity revealed their gift.
Physical Description: Tawny skin, along with wavy, long, copper hair. Heavy lidded, downturned, virescent eyes. Light freckles line a straight nose, above teasingly curved lips.
“I’m many things, but a liar is rarely one of them, love.”
Warning: There will be strong language, possibly sexual content, and gore in this story. Please, do not read if that makes you uncomfortable.
Hello, and welcome to Deity's Gift.
This is an interactive wip in the earliest stages, and currently, only the prologue is available. Once I learn more about twine it will most definitely be updated in terms of looks, though now, you'll have to bare with me(I know it looks awful).
Go here for my tumblr: my development blog! There, you'll be able to ask questions and learn about Ros!
- Prologue Finished!Oct 20, 2021
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I LOVE EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS I've always loved stories set in palaces with nobility and stuff, so I'm really looking forward to this one! The writing is lovely, and the start also seems promising, so I'm very excited for the next update!
Thanks so much for making this! I love it so far! I wanted to let you know that we've mentioned it in our list of recommended Twine stories. But if that's not okay just let me know. You can view it here, let us know if there are any other details we should add for your title --> https://itch.io/t/1763600/twine-games-with-character-customization-part-1
I like what I have read as of yet and look forward to when I can read more
There are a few typo here and there that you should check again, not so much that it will be hard to understand though. But besides that, the story is really good!
The plot is amazing 🤩 just one thing ; pronounces for simone and theodora often change between he and she please fix this it feels wierd that characters change gender each line
I am already in love with this. I just wanted to let you know that in the second part of the prologue, when you're in the kitchen, it doesn't keep the pronoun of Simon. You're talking to him, but then it says 'she shakes her head...' instead of 'he'. Other than that, everything else looks good!! :D
Another thing I noticed. In the gardens there's a spot where it says "yet the $mctitle makes no move". $mctitle is not declared.
I can't wait for more!
Oo! It's a really nice start! I like to play more of it!^^